Heehee
I liked this. It made me giggle with amusement.
Heehee
I liked this. It made me giggle with amusement.
Well hey, even a giggle or two means I did my job! Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for taking a moment to leave a review! It's great to get feedback.
Oy vey...
Even I can make a better flash than that... and that's saying something, considering I'm new.
do it then bitch
Hmm...
The dialogue didn't really give the characters any personality, and there were some capitalization errors (if you intend to make this a series, it helps to make the dialogue look and/or sound nice). It wasn't too bad, but it needs more depth and plot if you want it to be popular. Just watching kids play an online game isn't that exciting.
Meh
A little excessive blood and gore, but a nice try. Search for some tutorials on NG to work on your movement, and you'll be good.
What the...
The fuck is this? You didn't even do anything, just took a video of a little girl being smacked in the face by a ball off of E! and put it in flash. Very talented.....yeah, BLAM.
Good
I thought the first scene with the girl had a bit too many gratuitous cleavage and panty shots, but other than that, it was freakin awesome. Some of it looked like it was actually in 3D though, like the table she slides across. Was that actually in flash?
Very nice
Yeah, the ending was kinda sudden, but you can't really change that if the story was told to you by someone else. Still, i really enjoyed it.
As I reading this in my head, I suddenly realize I'm viciously attracted to men.
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